Wednesday, March 17, 2010
Thursday, March 11, 2010
Koh's Blog Thoughts
After reading my blogs from the beginning of the course, I realized that I started to have more to say in the later ones. At first, I was sort more reserved and sort of held things back. I think that I was simply aware that other students would be reading my blogs and had to comment on them, so I sort of stayed away from expressing my actual point of view on certain subjects. As I got more into the books, I start to show more interest in the subject because of my increasing knowledge and growing opinion. I really liked my blog on David Maywhoor because I was really irritated with his presentation. During his whole lecture, I kept getting tired of him telling us the problem that exists and never giving a solution. I was just so annoyed with his complaining about something and lack of action because talking to us about it wasn’t going to fix the logging issue that he presented to us, so why would he be wasting his time with us when he could be looking for an alternative. This really got me going and my opinion is shown in the post. My least favorite blog is my post on the first reading of Lost Mountain. I mostly didn’t like it because of how it didn’t seem to spark any interest in my readers. Everyone that commented simply said, “I agree…” and didn’t have much else to say that I didn’t already say. I think that this sort of reflected my lack of depth in the post. They weren’t discussing much because I don’t think I wrote anything very noteworthy. However, as the reading of Lost Mountain progressed and we started to have more discussions in class, my blogs started to develop more and I began including more of my own thoughts in the blogs. I think that this is because I started to become more comfortable with the people that would be reading my blogs. In my later comments, I started to include my opinion more on the subjects that people talked about in Lost Mountain. In the second section of reading Lost Mountain, I commented on a few people’s posts how I thought really thought on the issues. Specifically, on Chelsea Stoner’s blog, it is apparent that I have a pretty solid opinion on the matter of the people staying in their hometown that is being destroyed from mountain top removal. I feel like others have had a similar experience as I have had in that comments in later posts seem more opinionated and offer further discussion on the blogs. After watching the movie “Food, Inc” and then blogging about it along with the first part of the reading, I noticed that people were really getting into the subject matter and thinking more into the problems that were presented in the film. It was good to see that others were getting just as interested as I was about the food industry and how much is actually affects us indirectly. This was cool because the comments began to become more of a discussion because people’s opinions were more prominent than previous posts. This most certainly helped with the course readings because it allowed for me to see other people’s opinions and even raised awareness to things I missed in the reading. The film, I think, should have been shown after the reading because I started to lose motivation to read supplement to something that I just watched. It would be better if we’d watched it after reading because the whole time we would read the book, we’d want to watch the movie that it hypes up. Overall, the blogs were a good learning tool that enhanced my learning of the environmental issues covered in class. It took a different route in teaching us how to form and express our opinions.
Sunday, February 21, 2010
Argument Bibliography
Argument Bibliography
Avasthi, Amitabh. GM Crops: Pest Resistant Crops better Than Insecticide Use, Analysis Says. 07 June 2007. Web. 7 Feb 2010. <http://www.gmofoodforthought.com/2007/06/gm_crops_pestresistant_crops_b.html>.
Domingo, Jose. “Toxicity Studies of Genetically Modified Plants : A Review of the Published Literature,” Critical reviews in food science and nutrition, 2007, vol. 47, p. 721-733.
Roseboro, Ken. Scientist: GM food safety testing is “woefully inadequate”. January 2009. Web. 7 Feb 2010. <http://www.thenon-gmoreport.com/articles/dec08/gm_food_safey_testing_inadequate.php>.
Sakko, Kerryn. The Debate Over Genetically Modified Foods. Web. 7 Feb 2010. <http://www.actionbioscience.org/biotech/sakko.html>.
Smith, Jeffrey. Spilling The Beans. May 2009. Web. 7 Feb 2010. <http://www.responsibletechnology.org/utility/showArticle/?objectID=2989>.
Weintraub, Arlene. “Salmon That Grow Up Fast.” BusinessWeek (2006). Web. 31 jan 2010. < www.businessweek.com/magazine/content/06_03/b3967111.html>.
Argument Outline
Thesis: Although biotechnology companies have posed a solution for “world hunger,” GM foods have not proven to be healthy to humans. With such little evidence to show their safety, they should not be used to feed humans until further testing has been done.
I. Introduce to the audience the methods used to alter genes of different species
A. transgenic plantation
B. beneficial claims
II. This paragraph will talk about the lack of research there is on GM foods and make the assumption that biotechnology companies are hiding the negative effects from the public.
A. Biotech Companies do not allow for independent studies
B. Why can’t we study what we eat?
III. Appealing to the audience is going to be the goal here in revealing that two-thirds of the food that is sold in the stores has GM ingredients in them. How can we continue to eat foods that have not been proven to be healthy? Are we okay with simply eating whatever poison is put in front of us?
A. Appeal to logos on why we would eat something we have no idea what it really is
IV. Reveal how genes that produce toxins are put into plants. When we eat these plants, we are not only eating those unhealthy toxins, but the genes can also alter ours.
A. Bt gene is put into crops to fight off insects
B. We are eating toxin producing genes that could potentially be harmful
V. Studies done on animals
A. Studies done on female and male rats and livestock have shown to mutations to their reproductive systems and the cause of infertility.
VI. Pose the idea that by altering the genes of the food we eat, we are altering our own genes. By eating something that is meant to kill off something else we will end up killing ourselves.
A. If we cannot prove that GM foods are healthier, how do we know that they aren’t killing us?
VII. Make the claim that biotechnology companies are controlling what we eat with their monopolizing growth in our economy. Eventually everything we eat is going to be altered with who knows what. In order to stop this we need to support local markets, grow our own food, etc.
A. Monsanto nearly owns the entire corn market and controls the prices
B. Support local businesses to keep them from monopolizing with altered foods
VIII. Conclude that we can make a difference in a few different changes in our lifestyle. Nothing gets changed without individual change, so we can either submit to a monopolizing biotechnology company, or we can be healthy contributors to not only ourselves but to our economy as well.
Food Inc. Part 3
The third readings were interesting in that they sort of gave us different perspectives. They were aimed at different audiences to help the reader understand more clearly what is going on within the food industry. I liked the part where he talks about “questions for a farmer” because it immediately tied me into the text as he sort of leads me to think of questions that I should consider when purchasing foods from the store. He suggests that I buy local foods, foods in season, grow my own food, and to just question where the foods come from and how they are raised. This strategy of putting me on the spot makes me feel like I can make a difference without having to really reach out to extreme measures. However, something that could be a bad strategy to the reading was that at some points it seemed too fact based. Sometimes I would lose interest in the amount of facts presented to me with my little amount of background knowledge of the subject. This specifically happened in the “Sustainable Table” section for me. I didn't really like Joel Selatin's section because I felt like I was being talked down to or like I was living an awful life. At times, he seemed like he was better than me, which was a turn off in the reading because I lost interest in what he had to say. He does make a good point, however when he mentions how these huge food industry companies have no incentive to stop monopolizing over smaller farmers and markets. This was done to make the audience believe that there is no stopping them without us decreasing our consumption of the products that they produce. Although some parts of the reading get dry and boring, I find that it is a good supplement for those who are really interested in subjects covered in the movie. It’s offers many persuasive essays about a problem, and actually gives ways that we, as consumers, can help without having to be a radicallist.
Wednesday, February 17, 2010
My Side of The Argument
In my argument essay I will be writing about my opinion against GM foods. I will explain the negative effects that genetically modified foods have on humans and the environment. I will also cover how there hasn’t been proper testing done before released into the public market. Since the majority of the foods we eat contain GM products or ingredients, it is important that we make sure that they are healthy. I will provide examples of some testing that has been done along with their results, and then mention how many have had trouble in conducting further research. The logic behind “you are what you eat” may also be a point that I may try to cover in my essay as well, being that if we are eating cows that eat GM corn, then we are essentially eating an altered food that hasn’t been proven to be healthy. My argument will focus on appealing to pathos and logos as I try to expose the less appealing side of GM foods.
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Food Inc. Part 2
Sunday, February 14, 2010
Food Inc. Part 1
Monday, February 1, 2010
Paraphrase This
Sunday, January 31, 2010
GM Foods
Genetically Modified Foods
The average person eats nearly 1500 pounds of corn a year either by itself or indirectly. It’s what the cows, chickens, and pigs eat, it’s what is in anything containing high fructose corn syrup, and it’s in ethanol, or grain alcohol, that we drink every weekend. There simply isn’t a way to get around it, almost everything we eat is made up somehow of corn. At 1500 pounds a year, with 304,059,724 people living in The United States, we as a nation consume roughly 456,089,586,000 pounds of corn a year. With the help of genetically modified food, we are able to provide for this large amount of people to eat what they do everyday. Genetically modified foods are a necessity to our lives in that they offer us benefits that are astronomical.
There are two popular methods of genetic modification, cisgenesis, where genes are transferred from one organism to another similar one, and transgenesis, where a gene can be taken from anything and put into whatever we want. The idea is to find a gene that can produce a desired result, and insert it into the organism to make it better and more efficient. The extraction of a gene is also possible in that they can remove it so that it no longer hinders the organism’s productivity (Kang).
People have various opinions on whether GM foods are safe for humans, morally just, or even unfair to other food producing industries. There are claims that GM foods are against God in that we shouldn’t alter God’s creation. Others say that we are becoming guinea pigs in an experiment and that we really don’t know what we are eating because there hasn’t been proper testing on GM foods (Hall). There are also people that fear of a monopoly in the food industry that could drastically change the prices in the foods that are modified. The largest company that produces GM foods is called Monsanto, which can account for 91 percent and 97 percent of the world’s share in GM soybean and maize respectively. The fear is that a company like this will dominate the market and have complete control over food prices (O’Brien).
Although there is much skepticism on food that has been altered genetically, the benefits most certainly outweigh any negative claims. Many plants that get genetically modified, like corn and soybean, are altered so that they are more resistive to pests and prosper in conditions that they wouldn’t normally. This is such a great advantage in that not only is crop growth no longer weather dependent, but it doesn’t take environmentally harmful chemicals to keep them growing unharmed. The genes of animals, like salmon, can even be modified for rapid growth. These two examples alone are reasons that would tremendously help with the poverty issues around the world.
Bibliography
Hall, Angela. “Suzuki warns against hastily accepting GMO’s.” The Leader-Post (Canada), 26 April 2005.
Kang, JX. “Why the Omega-3 Should go to the Market.” Nature Biotechnology Print.
O’Brien, Robyn. “The Monopoly of the Food Supply: Price Inflammation and One Corporation’s Allergy to Labels.” 07 May 2008. Web. 30 Jan 2010. http://www.organicconsumers.org/articles/article_12154.cfm.
Weintraub, Arlene. “Salmon That Grow Up Fast.” BusinessWeek (2006). Web. 31 Jan 2010. http://www.businessweek.com/magazine/content/06_03/b3967111.html.
Wednesday, January 27, 2010
A Forest Returns
Monday, January 25, 2010
David Maywhoor
Friday, January 22, 2010
Research Prospectus
Another topic that I have considered is solid waste. It seems very obvious, but I don't think that the general public is involved as much as it should be in recycling. People just aren't aware of how much trash gets thrown into landfills, which obviously takes up a lot of space. With recycling what we can, we can save ourselves a lot of trouble in the long run. Landfills are getting full and cause contamination in groundwater and burning it would release hazardous toxins into the air. The opposing side will say that recycling cuts many jobs, but this makes no sense to me because in increasing our recycling, we will just create more jobs in the recycling business. Not only will recycling do that, but recycled products are always cheaper than the original products. So what do we do? I never really recycle, so this subject to me seemed interesting to cover.
Monday, January 18, 2010
Part Three
Tuesday, January 12, 2010
Pages 85-162
Saturday, January 9, 2010
Page 1-85
Wednesday, January 6, 2010
Clean Coal
When first opening each website in their own different windows, I noticed that the “This is Reality” site seemed much more interesting than “America’s Power.”
Though I initially had no interest in clean coal, I began scanning through the more interactive “This is Reality” website where they keep giving facts about the faults in clean coal. Knowing that coal is a fossil fuel that gives off many gases that are harmful to the environment, I could only see myself agreeing with the facts being presented in front of me. The site gave many reasons why coal burning is harmful, and even revealed that even after all of the advertising of clean coal, there’s not one power plant that stores its global warming pollution. They talk about how we need to invest more in solar, geothermal, and wind sources because they are not only efficient, but are renewable sources that do not emit the CO2 that burning coal does. These facts appeal to logos right away after the comment about there not being any plants that use the CC as claimed.
Flipping over to “America’s Power,” I was presented with reasons why coal is good for us. They try right away to appeal to the every day person and how they use electricity for video games, tv, and charging cell phones, so that we can’t say we aren’t indirectly using the coal ourselves. Tons of numbers are thrown around to make it seem as though things were being done to make our lives better with the use of coal. It is easy to even see a more localized view of how much coal energy is used by state so that we can more easily relate the how much coal we really use. There’s a fun little game where you can provide power to your house using different means of energy sources and the run different kinds of common household items. This serves to appeal to the logic of how using coal would give us more energy than any other source.
Both sites appeal to the average person in that they are trying to get us to use logic to reason with them. Many environmental councils and federations sponsor “This is Reality,” which to me seems as though they may be leaving things out, because to me these people always seem a little radical in their views, and not too much was said that I couldn’t have already guessed. “America’s Power” was set up in more of a legit looking website that appealed to me more and seemed more credible rather than a website that I could’ve put together. Overall, I would have to say that “America’s Power” seemed more like it was explaining to me facts with things to back up their claims as “This is Reality” just seemed like a website that Joe Dirt made because he doesn’t like power plants to burn coal.